On your side

On your side

A Chapter by Canicus
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song I wrote please check it out

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Goliath, a strong mighty warrior

withe sword, shield, and bow

came acros David

his strongest foe

 

David told him

I don't care what weapon you use

God is on my side

there's no way I can lose

 

he grabbed five smooth

stones out of the brook

fired them at Goliath

he fell and the earth shook

 

(chorus 1)

David knew

that as long as God was with him

he could do anything

he was in Gods army nothing could defeat them

 

anythings possible

just let god into your life

just let god into your life

just let god into your life

just let god into your life

 

(chorus 2)

God will be there for you

just let him lead the way

let him light the path

showing you into a new day

 

(chorus 1)

David knew

that as long as god was with him

he could do anything

he was in gods army nothing could defeat them

 

God will always be there for you



© 2011 Canicus


Author's Note

Canicus
A church song, this is from a non-christian. what do you think?

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well, a heart whelming song whether christian song or not
=]

Posted 8 Years Ago


I enjoyed. Good writing. I am also a non-christian. Your writings are good.
I used to write poems for all the religions. Worshipping God always pave the way for peaceful world. With regards Joshua.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Good. I'm a Jehovah's Witness..I am a Christian. Good write.

Posted 9 Years Ago


realy good ( I'm not christian either), lovely...

Posted 9 Years Ago


As a Christian, such as myself :3, I love it. It makes it even better to know a non-Christian wrote this. Keep writing! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Well as a non-christian I would say you are very learned in my religion, well penned.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Im not a christian eaither, nor am I cathlic so I can't say anything about the theme, but it was nice from what I know about the religion.

Writing keeps the dream alive
~V~

Posted 9 Years Ago


I think you did an amazing write here. Penned beautifully.
Very enjoyable and uplifting poem. I loved it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I adore it!!:)
If ur ever in need of some music
You can check out these
All night dynamite-techno
Woe is me - scream
He is we- Christian and if you need moree you know how to contact meh tt!!:)
Xoxoxo
~abbie
100/100

Posted 9 Years Ago



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