The Person Inside

The Person Inside

A Poem by Canicus

People just don't understand

they don't see what's behind my eyes

all the pain, all the misery

caused by all of life's lies

 

They think I have

nothing causing me to stress out

but there are many things

that no one knows about

 

Sometimes I

just can't handle it

I feel like crying my eyes out

then drowning myself in the tear-filled pit

 

My life is not all rainbows

like everyone thinks

it's far from it

and gets darker with ever blink

 

The person inside of me

is not a happy one

he is full of stress and sorrow

sometimes just wishing to be done

© 2011 Canicus


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I really enjoyed this one for some reason (though honestly I'm not sure why, I just did). I like the idea of drowning in one's own tears.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Understandable feeling that is easy for some to relate to, this feeling isn't fun, but it something good to write about, and you wrote this well. I know I feel like this many times and days. Spot on write.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I really like it , seems so important to write this kind of stuff and to share and of course people will relate to what your sharing ... Great poem , keep going ! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is very good, I like the message. You expressed yoursself well.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very beautiful... thanks for your honesty. Life can be tough... and we can all put up that happy smile... pretending...

Posted 9 Years Ago


So down-to-earth.
I feel the same way too sometimes.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Really awesome poem, and really relatable to people who have ever gone through something so bad that it makes just breathing a fight. Don't ever judge anyone because most of the time you have no idea what they've been through.

Posted 9 Years Ago


you're great', don't see others as doing better than you...keep on writing...

Posted 9 Years Ago


Amazing

Posted 9 Years Ago



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