Music

Music

A Poem by Canicus

The beat of the drums

just like the beating of my heart

everyboom and crash

letting me just... restart

 

the strumming of the guitar

one chord after another

put into perfect melody

holds me together

 

the lyrics from the singers mouth

just flows from the soul

makes me get lost in the song

making me lose control

 

it's heart, it's soul, it's life

music is more than just sound

music is a part of everyone

it makes the world go 'round

 

sound flowing to my heart

from my ears

music

helps me wipe awaymy tears

express myself

and face all of my fears.

© 2011 Canicus


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Well said Joshua, all very true. A lot of depth in this and where would we be without music? It's a salve for soul it really is... makes life worth living and helps us keep going. It also gives a voice to things deep inside that often we can't find the words for... keep writing! I like the your sentiments expressed here!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Aw...The first poem I've read from you...Such an amazing piece...I love the flow from each and every line...Who would ever hate music?
Excellent work, Joshua! Thanks for sharing this! :)))

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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you just wrote what music really is!! :) i agree with you:

"it's heart, it's soul, it's life
music is more than just sound
music is a part of everyone
it makes the world go 'round"

i really enjoyed your poem!! ^_^

*A.A.*

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Wow....... This poem is really great.
I love it, especially the second and the fourth stanza.
you showed the pure feelings of a music lover.
I love music....it always inspires me......
thanks for sharing
Great write



^^,

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Superb... :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I loved this poem. Considering, for a person that is part of the band, music is a big part of my life. It helps me say that I'm unique and not just some weirdo writer in this world. (Which people consider me being that) But anyways, I adored this poem and it really spoke to me. All music poems speak to me and really help my mind flow correctly. Without music, this world would be dull and boring. So over all if I had to rate this, which I will, I'd rated it 150% Best poem ever. Keep writing! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

awesome

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well said Joshua, all very true. A lot of depth in this and where would we be without music? It's a salve for soul it really is... makes life worth living and helps us keep going. It also gives a voice to things deep inside that often we can't find the words for... keep writing! I like the your sentiments expressed here!

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

amazing, it expresses every bit of amazement in music and the importance of it! without music id be gone

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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