Own My Heart

Own My Heart

A Poem by Canicus

You were able to
sneak your way into
this beaten life of mine
and I thought it was too good to be true

But you stole my heart
filled it with the happiness
that only you could make me feel
you saved me from the darkness

It's not completely gone
but you're willing to be my heroine
in this ever lasting battle
no matter what, I know you're the one

you did what I thought
... was impossible
as long as you keep trying
baby, you're unstoppable

I'll always be yours
my love for you stretches to infinity
you own my heart
always, forever, and eternity

© 2012 Canicus


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Author's Note

Canicus
It's the first time I've written in a while (sorry), so it's probably not as good as the writings before this. enjoy.

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It's as good as all of them. It flows and tells a story of its own.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Que
This is really cute :) It has a musicality to it - ever thought of making it into a song?
Cheers!

Posted 9 Years Ago


this is soooo freakin cute, its just too cute and the words are spoken just rigt. i really like it its simple yet deep, well thoughted out, caring and loving words.

Posted 9 Years Ago


cute :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


I love it Joshua, it's fabulous! And I know you write songs and I can hear it being belted out on your guitar... or sung in a soft way looking straight into her eyes :) Glad she's still with you and shining light into your soul :) Well done and keep up the great work!


Posted 9 Years Ago


It's wonderful. Very wonderfully written, great structure, and a beautiful meaning behind it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


honest and heartfelt. great write:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


its really sweet and sorta understanding, i like it

Posted 9 Years Ago


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tk
this is definitely something new from you, Joshua.
not as good as the writing before this?? you've got to be kidding me! :)
i love reading this piece very much! it's something sweet and passionate. the words flow simply, yet the emotions are outpouring.
i especially liked the last stanza:
"I'll always be yours
my love for you stretches to infinity
you own my heart
always, forever, and eternity"
those are the words i would love to hear from HIM..

Posted 9 Years Ago


wow...it's so sweet of you!!

Posted 9 Years Ago



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