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The Feeling

The Feeling

A Poem by skeletongirl

The clouds roll around me,

Inhaling the smoke.

 

call me an addict

but you don’t feel the pain

 

the tears dry up,

there is no despair.

 

Just light one up,

And you’re walking on air.

 

© 2017 skeletongirl


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Yeah Short and filled with lots of realistic contents Very simply effective Love your creative capacity with very little That's amazing to achieve Keep on Truly enjoyed

Posted 6 Years Ago


yes, when i used to smoke---there was that certain exhale that seemed to exhale some of the pain with each puff...
i really like this...

it's like inhaling good thoughts to offset the bad.

j.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Sounds like what I experience smoking a good cigar, and sipping Scotch. ;)

Live it, write it, share it!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Interesting. Its true we all need some form of recreation from time to time. As long as we don't over indulge in anything, I think we're fine. Nice poem and keep on writing!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Love it. Simple yet superb!

Posted 6 Years Ago


This was amazing! I absolutely loved it!

Posted 6 Years Ago


you write with imagery enjoyed this

Posted 6 Years Ago


WOW, beautiful, a talent you got there!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Everyone needs a form of escape. As long as it ain't hurting you or anyone ..screw it. Lol enjoyed this piece

Posted 6 Years Ago


This. Love it. Short. Perfectly stated. The im high i dont care attitude comes across. I love love love this.

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Added on December 18, 2017
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skeletongirl
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I am a young, inexpirenced writer. I enjoy writing although i often find myself in a dark place. I need advice and help! more..

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