We Gonna Come Up

S**t hits the fan/it's time to clean up

Create a new plan/we shake and mix up

That vodka and cran/ we gonna stir up

Nothing can/stop or deter us

 

The smoke-show caravan/allow us to blaze up

Don't lose your balance/we gonna change up

With sick spit talents/time that you listen up

Can't stand for silence/we need to speak up

 

We gonna come up

Just like that sun up

Best raise those guns up

Get all your sons up

So you can judge us

We gonna come up

 

The perfect woman/but with a prenup

Tell me what happened/to gettin caught up

As love laid it's hand/turn hearts to syrup

Across this land/we need to hear it

 

We need to come up

Just like that sun up

Best raise those guns up

Get all your sons up

So you can judge us

We gonna come up

 

Our so-called politicians/who are corrupt

On daily missions/to stack their dough up

Don't spend a second/on how we grow up

But they're good Christians/so they will save us?

 

The same old traditions/they want to blame us

It's their sick twisted vision/that will retain us

If we don't pay attention/they disobey us

This democratic nation/home of the shameless

 

We need to come up

Just like that sun up

Best raise those guns up

Get all your sons up

So you can judge us

We gonna come up

How dare you blame us?

We gonna come up

 

Reviews

[Adam Jordan Turner]

This is very good. I really like this one a lot. Is it a Lyric? It's structured like one and if not would definitely make a good one. I could see this being one of those kick in the face rap songs, with a message everyone needs to hear. I really appreciate this work. It reminds me of something I wrote called "Don't Need A Reason To Love" You should check it out in my pieces. I think we share similar views. Very nice write here, I'll be sharing this to some of my friends on here!

[Mercury Mirrors]

You find so many ways to end with 'up' It's really talented. :]

Lizz

[L.G. Knight]

Wow nicely done! Great lyrics and I deffinatly agree with Adam it was would make a great in your face rap song...

~Frances~

[April Child]

Oh I like. I could see you owning the stage with this one, delivering MC style and thats how it read to me in my head I could hear the MC. Some nice lines in here, made me nod my head, smile. Left me wanting more actually.

Maybe the chorus needs less repetition. Perhaps after every other stanza. I don't know, just a thought.

[The Poor Man's Poet]

This is a good write, I like the flow and refrain
I think I would like to see this piece done live
at an Open mic night on a stage somewhere.

The Poor Man's Poet.

[forfila]

Nice flow,,,,,,straight up, I did enjoy.