Out of Control

Out of Control

A Poem by JustWantLove
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I will never give up!

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In scheme of things, think Grand

Living a life to gently welcome,
Accept the grace, and not demand.
Let go of worries that so bind us,
And make the way for a new life,
Give in, be loved, be cherished so,
Let me adore you, just let go,
Each day is of new light, so bright,
I am enchanted; storybook persona,
True desert without you, despite..
Life flows so purely, gently streaming,
My heart is aching, simply screaming;
I'm holding on for your arrival, I..
Just capture me for always and for us,
And close your eyes, then jump,
I will hold onto you, you're mine,
You get me too, my heart's a plus!

© 2010 JustWantLove


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I like it.
It shows emotion and I really wanted to read it to the end.
It's great.

Posted 14 Years Ago


My heart is aching, simply screaming;
I'm holding on for your arrival, I..
Just capture me for always and for us,
And close your eyes, then jump,
I will hold onto you, you're mine,
You get me too, my heart's a plus!

I like the consuming desire within your words. Very nicely written!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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JustWantLove
JustWantLove

*bleep*, IL



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* You will either love me, or hate me. Love, being the cataclysmic, overwhelming abundance of passion, hope and enduring. I am not for the fain of heart. Real, daring, blunt .. human. I am..in a.. more..

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