Irresistible Dreams

One. Forever. You. I. We. Are.

(..destination: life..)

One  universe ,  one  star,  one  life
In  sandy  beaches ,  sunrise ,  you
An angel's  breath ,  aroma ,  skies
Through  ocean  swam to  say I do
United,   joined  together,  dreams
Forever whole; Fire, water: steam
Look  in  my  eyes,   it  is  all  true.
Be  one  in  you,  eternally,  for all
In sunset's bliss, and  in star's  kiss
You're  mine,  and I belong to you!

Author's Note

Everyone has a dream; are we alive to attempt and fulfill it?

Reviews

[lostonewithlove]

i like this poem

[QuothCorvid]

This poem sent visuals of a man whispering into his lovers ear as they watched the stars. I really like the way you lead from one topic toanother it has a wonderful flow.

[LoveAndDreams]

This is amazing! I don't know how you do it but your pieces are just, brilliant! They speak volumes and are strong and emotional while also looking good. I must say though, I don't know why but I like those first few words, "destination: life" the most. It just seems right somehow. Amazing. :)

[Amber "Victoriomantic" ..]

This piece was wonderful; loved it! The structure is really interesting too, as it makes the poem seem as if it's a moment caught, like a breath. It seems as a dream is--a fleeting moment, there with full clarity one moment, gone the next, but always there as a whisper. Very nice read.

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

I can almost sense you, your voice, reading this poem. I actually found myself holding my breath when I got to the end. In sunset's bliss, I could feel myself melting into you.

Exquisite, beautiful, rhapsodic, euphoric poetry!

Linda Marie

[Brianna Brie]

I like your unique style of writing. It is a blissfully romantic poem with depth. Thanks for sharing.

[AllyKinzz:)]

Beautiful, I liked it. Lovely piece.
Very, um whats the word, INSPIREING!! :D

[Anxelin]

this was so beautifully perfect :)

[Taunt-gently]

Anyone falling in this poem would want to be a strong swimmer is all I say, the currents are swift and relentless and the water is warm, remaining sober would be a must I’d say. Anyway that is to say I like this one too and I ask are you planning to leave here? Here being WC.

[jenniewren (J.W. Bouwma..]

i especially love the structure you used on this piece!!! it forces you to pay very close attention to every word and is so pleasing to the eye just to look at