Expensive Truth

Expensive Truth

A Poem by JustWantLove

Free-verse; Passion at peak, expression of uneasiness!


 'You're wrong! The  strength of my heart
 Is  as  solid  as a  rock of  earth; my  life is
 Brighter than  the sun itself  and aura of
 My  soul,  sickens  with  health, to  spear
 All  innocence for all  and give the gift of
 Life, my heart is fire of the bluest flames
 Sheds  hope to  gleaming hearts in strife'

I won't be silent for truth in vain is pain
Blood  storms through life in me for  you
It bursts my veins and steers them blue
In dire need, for ecstasy I  heed  of  truth
Of my  existence and of  breath I've died
The silhouette of dreams exists in  plays
And   poetry  of   tongues  I  speak  inside

You  are my  cure! A drug  I seek in days
I live and wither at the height of passion
That  I  give`; with  strain and  pleasure
Hearts fulfilled through fantasies and be
Only  through  you  I'm  visionary,  true
In hopes  and dreams  I am  of  You, I see!

© 2010 JustWantLove

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Incredible format and very powerful, passionate words. The final stanza is a near tour de force. ' Blood storms through life in me for you .. It bursts my veins and steers them blue '

Well done, my friend.

Posted 13 Years Ago

Visually symmetrical, this poem is not only striking to the eye but striking to the mind as well. I could feel the potency of your words, as if they were vibrating off the very screen.

"Blood storms through life in me for you
It bursts my veins and steers them blue"

Absolutely stunningly beautiful!

Linda Marie

Posted 13 Years Ago

Deep and powerful. Loved every line it all flowed perfectly together. You really have a way with words and you turn everything you write into a beautiful piece of art.

Posted 13 Years Ago

The first complete stanza was stunning. Everything went so well together. It was such a deep and meaningful write. Amazing, as usual :)

Posted 13 Years Ago

this was a wonderful and powerful poem.
I enjoyed reading it :)

Posted 13 Years Ago

Wow that all I can say it strong as it really good it also seems to strike you at the begining

Posted 13 Years Ago

A powerful poem. So many strong line in your poem. I like it all. Ending was excellent.

Posted 13 Years Ago

This is so wonderful!
I liked this write alot.

Posted 13 Years Ago

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"with strain and pleasure
Hearts fulfilled through fantasies and be
Only through you I'm visionary, true
In hopes and dreams I am of You, I see!"

Deep & full of vivid emotion !! Good Write !!

Posted 13 Years Ago

Very philosophical and enlightening.

Posted 13 Years Ago

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Added on January 26, 2010
Last Updated on January 26, 2010



*bleep*, IL

* You will either love me, or hate me. Love, being the cataclysmic, overwhelming abundance of passion, hope and enduring. I am not for the fain of heart. Real, daring, blunt .. human. I am..in a.. more..


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