My Everything!

..that's all he wrote..

(..life spent, all worth..)

I want to thank you,
For living inside of me;
I want to thank you,
For leading me to see;
I'm alive to thank you,
For all you've made me be,
I dream to thank you,
For letting me be free.
I sing to thank you,
For being next to me,
I cry to tell you,
For gazing in my soul,
I want to show you,
For never letting go.
I'm here to show you,
You're air that I do breathe,
I'm born to know you,
To love you and to cease,
Just know: I love you,
You're Ecstasy to me,
Aroma of all life:
I'm waiting on my knee!

(..s.c..)

Author's Note

It is, what it is!

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Fierce flow of emotions here! Really loving, open and caring .. this was a huge tribute to another of very, very high appeal. There's so many great lines in such a short, simple writing that represent so much .. I sure hope that whomever it's written for sees and feels the depth of such quality.. words to move mountains!

[emmajoy]

And what it is .. is love, true, deep love.

Beautifully written, so heartfelt.

' You're air that I do breathe, ' - now could you live without air, without her? I think not.

[jenniewren (J.W. Bouwma..]

I want to thank you,
For living inside of me

this is my favourite set..

[Vember Judgement]

I like it, it's very straight forward and has a clear message:)

[Cassandra D.]

This was truly amazing!
you left me completely speechless!

[Chirinos20]

wow, are you proposing to someone? It is a great write! I like how the emotions flow throughout the whole piece. Thanks for sharing!

[Sophie]

It says it all in an honest straight forward rhyme. I like it. It expresses how much you adore this person and how there your everything.

[Matt]

hmmm very interesting..
very unique way of writing this piece.
good flow.