Finally

(Please read freely; connect the leaning passion onto the next supporting pickup; read with your soul; feel with your heart. Connect the dots...and find life)

There   you   are; in   disguise
Drawing me  in by your eyes
In full   moon, you  are  there
Just  the  one beach we share
And   in  cold   Winter  nights
Hopelessly,  lifting to heights
Wishing,   praying,   in  faith
Mirror  reflections  are  made

One   to   One,   take   a    gaze
Now   surrender  ablaze,   see
Believe and  do  melt,  listen:
In  heartfelt': I am  you,  you
Are, I ... mirrored,  one,   two
It's true; See me in  you,  just
Be,
I am swimming to you,  now
Please   swim  back  to   me...

Author's Note

As the last days are falling upon us; staring at the big, Full moon; on the piece of life I seek answers and wish wishes, that you are staring back to me, reciting to me your everlasting magical spell, manifesting heaven itself into me; receiving my heart, as I hand it to you over the open waters, enlightened by the meaning of life! Waiting for you!

Reviews

[Erotic Goddess]

I am watching Finding Nemo right now, so this was just perfect! LOL! Wonderful writing. You have a great rhythm to your work, and I love the layout too!

xxoxx

[Gandré]

what a sweet begging for love. Isn't it wonderful, to read romantic poetry? I love it. It is about angst, people are afraid of consequences, this poem is about it.. Also nice way to say: - In heartfelt I am you, you are,I mirrored one, two. I enjoyed this very much.

[Dev]

I like the way how its presented.. has a good flow to it !!

[The Tea Party Mouse.]

I like the form in which it is written. Beautiful, and it seems more real. Like a stream of consciousness.

[Erin Lee]

this is a beautiful love poem. i love the tango between the narrarator and the person he's writing to/for. thank you for such a great read.

[Therene]

Wow!

It made me think through what I thought I knew. :D

"One to One, take a gaze
Now surrender ablaze, see"
-very beautiful line.

Job well done! :D

[Keli Renee]

Very thought provoking. Great write.

[R J Askew]

I am swimming to you big boy and I am one hungry cuttlefish of cutenss. Swim with me, be mine out on the reef of romance ralised in rabidity. (exits review stage right, sinks back to bottom of budgerigar's cafe as piece of broken dream, fit only for others to sharpen their beaks on)

[Theresa]

Another beautiful piece. I love the ending:
"I am swimming to you, now
Please swim back to me..."
It ends more on a wish. It leaves the reader hoping along with you.