A Poem by JustWantLove

One door closed, 777 doors open!

And as the sun would rise beyond the distant hills, It is...
Its warmth will comfort all the life around,
Will never miss.
The grand Majestic, giver of all life, Lover’s escape...
It touches hearts with melancholy,
Dreams beyond seascape~
Season of summer, the seeds of planted roots, Will grow...
In time, new life will merge with all,
Astound, fulfill and glow ... bestow!
A perfect time, an influence of ripe aromas, life and glee...
In unison they mend existence of two halves, collide,
Grow and progress~,
Unite serenely and be free,
In joyous melodies, speak softly to each other:
“Let’s Just Be!”


© 2010 JustWantLove

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Fantastic! The words just flowed like water fram a tap. Loved it! Wordgasmic! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago

Very beautiful poem. I especially enjoy the last four lines. Like J. W. said below, the free form foundation with the classical overtones really makes this an interesting read.

Posted 9 Years Ago

A beautiful and gentle poem. It remind me of a words a old person would tell his grandson. I like the description and the ending. A outstanding poem. Thank you.

Posted 9 Years Ago

this is incredible.. a classical sort of flow, but mixed with a very freeform structuring.. and the images are gently air-filled

simply wonderful

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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4 Reviews
Added on July 19, 2010
Last Updated on July 20, 2010



*bleep*, IL

* You will either love me, or hate me. Love, being the cataclysmic, overwhelming abundance of passion, hope and enduring. I am not for the fain of heart. Real, daring, blunt .. human. I a.. more..


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