Way to Relax.

When you let your mind roam,
  it is so easy to lose focus.
Drift from here to there,
  no real focus.

Now, if you can grab your thoughts,
  good, bad, even just passing.

You get the chance.

Take control.

Laugh.

Cry.

Let it out.

Just a way to relax.

Reviews

[Carol Cashes]

This seems a little contradictory: let the mind roam and drift: and you're relaxing and relaxing...then you grab thoughts - take control, decide to laugh or cry and that's relaxing, too? But, considering that you yourself describe your style as "rambling", this is the first piece I've read that...rambles. *laughing* Having read some of your other work, I have a sense of your "voice", so I have to ask: Was your niece bugging you when you wrote this one? I'm kidding...I'm just having a hard time grasping this one, it's 1:45 am sooo...

[Jon Roggie]

You find the moment of connection.
Niece was not involved. That came a few years down the line.
Remember, this was almost six years ago.
While letting your self roam,
you have to catch the moments.
Pinpoint the instant.
Respond from the emotions.

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Jon roggie,
Way to Relax" was a reminder that being in control is good, especially one's own thoughts. A roaming mind holds good but finding a place to pinpoint within that vista is pretty wonderful. "Drift from here to there." Sometimes it is natural too do that too. It's like a bird testing its natural environment.
blessings,
Kathy

[Jon Roggie]

Thank you. This is going back a bit. At the time, I was trying to learn how to express my thoughts. Nothing has changed there.

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Jon, I find that you express yourself just fine! I know how you feel. We share our essence of thought and feeling and it can be a vulnerable experience. That's ok. We are human after all.Thankyou for your writing. I enjoy reading people's work from from front to back. Bless you much today
Kathy