" Ward "

" Ward "

A Poem by judith106
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Written in 2003. Maclane Hospital, Belmont Mass.

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Maybe this is where I should be. 
I don't want to exist in your world. 
Give up hope, please let me fade away.
Forgotten in my locked room.
Holding a Strange desire to stay.
Yet wanting out so desperately.
Forever feeling misunderstood.
Thoughts that seem twisted to others.
Still not to me...
                         JAM

© 2012 judith106


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Thank you both for the reviews. I haven't been active on this site for awhile

Posted 7 Years Ago


i love this to be completely honest it was a great piece nice job.... yours truely

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very eerie and to the point, yet still mysterious. i love how it ends on an ellipsis, gives it a feeling of uncertainty.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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