A Poem by Jules

My motives may have been skewed
my critique a tad bit flawed
i'm standing there staring
Suddenly I feel very small


What is it that you wanted again?
Tell me once more how it's done
I can't seem to move my feet
My shoelaces have come undone


It's like I'm spinning in a circle
Only, I haven't moved from this spot
I'm going to judge you now
I think you have been smoking "The Pot"


You tend to state the obvious
and as I'm wondering in amazement
I dont understand this path
that my curiosity has taken


You appear vulture like at times
I sense a frustrated martyr
Where is it you were going all along?
Don't you want to go any further?


My laces are now entangled
and lay around my shoes like weeds
I'm overcome with urgency
to go nowhere and plant my seeds


Will you carry me through the thick?
Have you seen what happens next
Can you just ignore the past,
the one that claims you perlexed?

© 2011 Jules

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I always enjoy your style of writing. Never stop...You truly have talent.

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Added on July 26, 2011
Last Updated on July 26, 2011



Coloma, MI

I am... a mother, a giver, a lover, a sinner, a friend, sometimes broken...but always there. I am human. I love poetry, but I love writing it even more. more..

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