The relation chaos

The relation chaos

A Story by ayesha gupta
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confusion in relation can cause chaos

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Being in relation is the most wonderful feeling. As a sister, friend , lover, or a collegue.. we see so many people around us which make our life so peaceful and happy. I mean seriously, if there would be no one, life would have no meaning but my dear readers, every coin has two sides. Anger, frustation, loneliness of purpose are the top feeling running through everyone., the blame games heard everywhere. I confess even i feel so much hurted sometimes. And this feeling is very common among the lovers. I recently visited my cousin Ashi, who was sad of being in relation with her boyfriend , who always used to yell at her for unattended calls, irrespective of her situation. people like him think they are showing 'love ' by yelling at their partners. some may think 'he/she doesnt loves me at all. i love him so much but he didnt care to pick call' . if you think like that, you need to rethink and understand your partner. Dont let your wrong pre-judgement about someone the cause of letting away your happy relation. Understanding your partner is not bad at all. readers, look around, have u misunderstood your mates?

© 2014 ayesha gupta


Author's Note

ayesha gupta
ignore grammar. create a better relation. start sorting instead of blaming.

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I agree.
"Dont let your wrong pre-judgement about someone the cause of letting away your happy relation. Understanding your partner is not bad at all. readers, look around, have u misunderstood your mates?"
No perfect people. Just us trying our best. Thank you for sharing the excellent story and thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


nicely penned sometimes .. every tiny little things matter for those who are in relation.. respective each others life would be better... peace :).... nice para it felt like a diary entry :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


ayesha gupta

9 Years Ago

thanx for writing review :)
Sreenath

9 Years Ago

*respecting each other (sorry for that)
ayesha gupta

9 Years Ago

thats understood. :)
nice write. liked the title too.

Posted 9 Years Ago


ayesha gupta

9 Years Ago

thanks.. m glad that you liked it.
since I read author's note I won't comment anything related to the grammar or construction, nice message to lovers and their quarrels.

Posted 9 Years Ago


ayesha gupta

9 Years Ago

thanks for reviewing.
It is more near to an article than a story I feel so, as a new and young writer you have done a good job, hope and wish u best for future :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 18, 2014
Last Updated on September 18, 2014
Tags: relation, love, anger

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ayesha gupta
ayesha gupta

patna , bihar, patna, India



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Hi everyone. I m writing here as Ayesha Gupta (my pen-name). I m 18yr old. I m here to learn writing and to be friends with you all. I try to write which not neccessarily be 10/10 in your views, but i.. more..

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