My Bleeding Heart

My Bleeding Heart

A Poem by ayesha gupta
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sometimes best-friend can be back-stabber

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my heart is bleeding,
see what you have done!
i though you are,
my person, my love,
i trusted you, you know?
you had broken my trust,
so please leave me,
with a bleeding heart.
that one, which you stabbed,
with your words,
now see me losing,
my tears , my wound.
i dont know what had happened to you,
i know you were never like this.
now the sky is fallin',
over my world,
you got me paralyzing,
with all you have done.
you can never repair,
the things you have done,
so let me die inside,
with a bleeding heart.

© 2014 ayesha gupta


Author's Note

ayesha gupta
it reminds me of julius ceaser's death. his friends stabbed him. likewise there are people, who stab with words..it hurts.
plz do write reviews.

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This beautifully written...Words can hurt more than a punch... for the physical pain will ease but the pain of the hurt is hard to heal..."If you say that you love me, then prove it not just say it" words and actions go hand in hand, they need both to make it work. It is not enough to say it not show it and same with showing love and not saying it.

Great Job. Thank you for sharing!

Suk

Posted 5 Years Ago


ayesha gupta

5 Years Ago

thanx suk. :) as i m learing to write poem, i really need reviewers like you who can motivate me by .. read more
I saw a honesty and fairness with the words....lovely writing :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


ayesha gupta

5 Years Ago

thanx for review. :-)
nicely written, too much agony...

Posted 5 Years Ago


ayesha gupta

5 Years Ago

thanks for your review
A sad journey into love disappointment. When we bleed. It mean we are still alive. Strong emotions and thoughts in the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


ayesha gupta

5 Years Ago

i used "bleeding" in the sense that some words hurt us so much. that they literally stab our heart c.. read more
Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

You are welcome.
I can feel the emotions here, as I have faced such situation, good going ayesha keep it up

Posted 5 Years Ago


ayesha gupta

5 Years Ago

thanks :) and if such situation happened with you, then m sorry for making you remember it.
hardeep sabharwal

5 Years Ago

its ok dear friend,, life is a teacher and we learn many things,, so good and bad both are learning .. read more
ayesha gupta

5 Years Ago

yep. you are right.
Love the wording! Great job!

Posted 5 Years Ago


ayesha gupta

5 Years Ago

thanks. :)
thats so relatable for me,. i loved this agoney expressed here.. well done

Posted 5 Years Ago


ayesha gupta

5 Years Ago

thanx for your review.. it feels great when people like your work. :-)
stars are far

5 Years Ago

yeah iknow and its always my pleausre :)
i absolutely agree with your note. liked your description of emotions. keep it up.

Posted 5 Years Ago


ayesha gupta

5 Years Ago

thanks surya, for reviewing my work. :-)

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Added on September 27, 2014
Last Updated on October 23, 2014
Tags: friendship, betrayal, poem

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ayesha gupta
ayesha gupta

patna , bihar, patna, India



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Hi everyone. I m writing here as Ayesha Gupta (my pen-name). I m 18yr old. I m here to learn writing and to be friends with you all. I try to write which not neccessarily be 10/10 in your views, but i.. more..

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