Desire

my thoughts on "desire"..

Desire...
it's not just a small word,
it's the energy to achieve my dream.
Desire...
it's not about dreaming endlessly,
it's about converting my vision to reality.
Desire...
it's not about sitting hopelessly,
it's my dedication, i will improve.
Desire...
it's not what i 'want',
it's what i 'need'.
Desire...
it's not about anyone,
it's about what i feel.
I dare to desire,
i believe in me.
Even if i fail,
atleast, i would be happy,
that i 'desired',
rather than thinking,
'It can't be me'

Author's Note

its more than a poem to me.. my inner-voice with which i talk..that motives me , and guides when i feel low...my desire.
i hope you like it!
waiting for rewiews. :)

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree.
"atleast, i would be happy,
that i 'desired',
rather than thinking, "
Things not done make us wish we were braver in life. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Stephanie K.]

This piece was amazing. It has put into words something that is often hard to describe. Wow, I just wish I could own this poem it was so well put. As for increased vocabulary, I personally wouldn't change a thing. The words were real and simple and sometimes that's all you need.

[ayesha gupta]

thanks a lot stephanie. i am glad you liked it.

[DoormanDan]

Wow, this nailed the definition of desire perfectly. Fantastic poem. On a scale of 1-10, I give this an 11!

[ayesha gupta]

thanks for the awesome review. i m glad you liked it.

[The Black Warrior]

LOVE IT! ;)

Well done ayesha!

[ayesha gupta]

thanks for the review and appreciation. :)

[ASHIDASH]

Good poem. Thanks for sharing

[ayesha gupta]

thanks for review.

[Angad Waraich]

Okay this is a nice piece,intriguing.
But a little editing and use of a better vocabulary can do this piece wonders.

Desire...
it's not what i 'want',
it's what i 'need'.
I loved these line.

Well done.
Thank you for sharing.
Angad

[ayesha gupta]

thanks a lot for review and suggestions. :)

[Surya pradha]

a beautiful poem with good moral. well written!

[ayesha gupta]

thanks a lot. :)

[Mayank]

very powerful desire you have got, keep that flame alive.

[ayesha gupta]

thanks a lot.

[RAOrourke]

Desire...
it's not what i 'want',
it's what i 'need'. ...loved this line! Your inner-voice led you to an inspirational poem! Well done!

[ayesha gupta]

thanks a lot. i am glad you liked it.

[Happy hours]

desire...you explained it very well...great job :)

[ayesha gupta]

thanks a lot, my dear friend.

[Happy hours]

you're welcome