Me

Me

A Poem by ayesha gupta
"

in a new relation, its important to hold your true self, or else life would be messy and painful.

"
I love you, its true,
you make me happy,
you are so nice.
but i have realised
that fine line where
my love turns obsession,
when you are not there,
ofcourse there are such times,
I feel angry,
depressed and hurt.
this love had became a drug,
pills for happiness,
I observed.

I still love you,
but I am not going to lose ME,
there will be occassions,
when I would have to walk alone,
there will be times,
when you will be far.
I want to stand strong alone,
and not depend on you for every milestone.
I want to restore the love,
which is now a drug or obsession.
I want to be happy,
even if you are busy,
or not there for me.
I want to discover ME

© 2014 ayesha gupta


Author's Note

ayesha gupta
a new poem..feeling like it.
hope you like it. read, rate, review, enjoy.

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

I love how it starts off!
Well done!


Posted 9 Years Ago


ayesha gupta

8 Years Ago

thanks mam..
A very important thing you explained here, human can't be alone, still time comes to be alone and I find ME when I'm alone and it become a habbit of me that I like it ME a lot now and surely pay an hour for me everyday that's my deal with me. I wish everyone to find ME in themselves bcoz time is in eternal race be happy. A beautiful poem I loved it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


ayesha gupta

9 Years Ago

thanks for review. :)
Quite important to love ourselves before sharing it.. Nice write. Interesting to see the thin thread between the love and obsession

Posted 9 Years Ago


ayesha gupta

9 Years Ago

thanks for review. i think love can create only a lovely feeling, if it brings feeling of depression.. read more
nicely done..........
i liked it!!!
:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


ayesha gupta

9 Years Ago

thanks a lot. :)
ayesha gupta

9 Years Ago

thanks a lot. :)
I still love you,
but I am not going to lose ME,
there will be occassions,
when I would have to walk alone,
there will be times,
when you will be far.
I want to stand strong alone,
and not depend on you for every milestone...wonderfully done! so true and so hard to do, to stay true to one's self! Great job

Posted 9 Years Ago


ayesha gupta

9 Years Ago

thanks for review. :))
I like it, sweet sense of love and care..pure and straight from heart

Posted 9 Years Ago


ayesha gupta

9 Years Ago

i am happy you understoody my view. :)
Nice...really like it and nicely done

Posted 9 Years Ago


well nicely written........usage of words at correct place and appropriately is very well done......

Posted 9 Years Ago


ayesha gupta

9 Years Ago

thanks kuldeep
Losing self esteem is not a true love. A true love is where there is the absense of any obssession or lust oriantation though this is the personal asset of ones identity should be yeilded in total dedication after having been united in a single wedlock.
At present this is an urgent need to be safe in the growing world where our society has been passing into a controversial stage. Your poem lets us think about the moral highness in love and all other soft issues...
Thanks for sharing so nice poem . Ayesha

Posted 9 Years Ago


ayesha gupta

9 Years Ago

thanks for review, sir.
M.A.Rathore

9 Years Ago

You're welcome Ayesha
This is first step towards real wisdom. But the road will not be easy. You will falter many times but ultimately you will find it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


ayesha gupta

9 Years Ago

thanks avinash.. :-)

First Page first
Previous Page prev
1
Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

639 Views
21 Reviews
Rating
Added on December 8, 2014
Last Updated on December 8, 2014
Tags: me, you, love, relation, discover

Author

ayesha gupta
ayesha gupta

patna , bihar, patna, India



About
Hi everyone. I m writing here as Ayesha Gupta (my pen-name). I m 18yr old. I m here to learn writing and to be friends with you all. I try to write which not neccessarily be 10/10 in your views, but i.. more..

Writing
truth truth

A Poem by ayesha gupta



Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..