Heaven

Heaven

A Poem by Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)
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My interpretation Painting original from friend

"
This door
This path this stairway too
I know to where
It leads
Away from satans sinful lust
To shine the light on all of us

At some sweet time I hope I go
So quickly there
And see my Lord and saviour
There
He'll greet me with such
Beautiful eyes
And lead me to a garden where
My passed on loved ones play
In light so fair

The tree of everlasting life
It grows so steadfast there through life
And death it never wears
The door is open for us to enter
See
So we live with him
Forever the slaughtered lamb
Of God
Who sits beneath shining
Star and moon

The sun he holds in his right hand
And shines a guiding light to
Every man who
Looks for him
In darkness he is always there
His face so radiant
So meekly fair
His words deafen me
His light his love
That's eternal see
He says to me
Come sit beneath
The moon with me
And take from my
Eternal tree of life

This path is yours
This door will open
He utters to me
My world opens
I bade goodbye to earthly night
And starsong light
And reach that heaven
Oh eternal life

© 2017 Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)


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Thank you Michael
For kind review

Posted 7 Years Ago


Again, another wonderful piece. Odes to Christ on high He who lives. You did great honor here.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Such a beautiful tribute to belief in a true, loving God.

Take care - Dave

Posted 7 Years Ago


Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

7 Years Ago

Thanks again Dave
Well for a true god worshipper and hell and heaven believer it sounds perfect...

But iam feeling uncomfortable...



Well nicely penned

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

7 Years Ago

Sorry if it made you feel amiss I just believe that is heaven
Oh Julie,this is poem is so uplifting and inspiring...it brings beauty to my eyes and peace to my heart. "In darkness he is always there"- so very true. "The path is yours..the door is open." I believe this. Thank you for this beautiful poem!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

7 Years Ago

Thanks Annette

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Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)
Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

Sydney , Australia



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Amateur old poet well not that old but not a young 20 anymore I live to write I write at least five poems ditties every weekend and a few during week I write quickly it just flows and bu.. more..

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