Pretty, Never Beautiful

Pretty, Never Beautiful

A Story by Annie
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She was pretty - short, freckled, but pretty. She could never be called beautiful, mind you. But yes, she was pretty.
Her eyes, however, were the most enchanting part about her. People say that, at birth, a fairy lost her way, and stumbled upon the child. With one look at the child, the fairy felt sad - Some have the brains, some the brawn, some the humour, but everyone needs beauty. So the fairy decided to grant the baby beautiful eyes, and from that day forward, the child had never been the same.
Some say that eyes are the window to your soul. If so, the soul must be a magical thing. Light, clear, and a very piercing blue... but I digress.
Yes, she would never be called beautiful - but the girl was quite pretty indeed.

© 2012 Annie


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I would really like to hear a story about this. I feel that it could definitely develop to a good descriptive piece that conveys some sort of greater universal truth. Either way your voice is quite comical and whimsical. I like it a lot. I really encourage you to develop this piece some more. I would really like to read it when you did.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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there's a very thin line of demarcation between beautiful and petty, this throws light on this thin line. do write more :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


THis is lovely description. I would scarcely advise you to add to it, since you've said all you wanted to say. But I would avise you to go on and write another story.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I would really like to hear a story about this. I feel that it could definitely develop to a good descriptive piece that conveys some sort of greater universal truth. Either way your voice is quite comical and whimsical. I like it a lot. I really encourage you to develop this piece some more. I would really like to read it when you did.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Annie
Annie

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Hey, I'm Annie. To be short, I love writing, I love music, I love dancing and I love being a Christian. I write all sorts of different things as my writing style changes as I change, but I hope yo.. more..

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