Mack Jack

Mack Jack

A Poem by john l smith



Mack Jack


Mack Jack could wear no hat

His head was just too thin      

So he consumed a ton of fat

But he still couldn’t win


No matter how much he ate

It didn’t fatten his head

Even though he licked his plate

It went to his feet instead


So he then ate upside down

Which seemed to work real well

For certainly, plate after plate

His head did certainly swell


Now he has another problem

Since he has used this position to eat

And this one has left him hobblin

Cuz, no shoes now fit his feet


© 2019 john l smith

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Oh, that Mack Jack has problems in a stack! No hat, no shoes, he'll soon be nude! Lying flat and eating cheese, perhaps the fat would go to his knees?

Posted 9 Months Ago

john l smith

9 Months Ago

a sorry site indeed
How your imagination takes over. Poor shoeless Mack Jack. Maybe he needs protein and not fat?


Posted 9 Months Ago

john l smith

9 Months Ago

or an analyst!
Christine Anne Shaw

9 Months Ago

Lol. Of course a shrink may do nicely :)

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Added on January 10, 2019
Last Updated on January 10, 2019