Emotionally inept

I hate being that person that writes about their feelings... but i'm going to do it anyway

Emptiness creeps where fullness was

And the lull of colorful static seems to almost become a norm

 

Movement seems to slow down as much as time

Leaving only that drowning feeling to continue

 

Morning breaks

Noon high

Evening sets

 

Feels like only seconds pass

Feel like years stretches pass

 

Morning breaks

Noon high

Evening sets

 

Lack of interaction leads to things close to hallucinations

Teddy Bears and Stuffed Animals seem to speak

 

Even they prefer the company of carpet then of pillows and sleep

While happy vibrations end with damp cheer

 

Morning breaks

Noon high

Evening sets

 

Feels like minutes wiz pass

Feels like decades inch pass

 

Morning breaks

Noon high

Evening sets

 

Batteries die and stress seems to mound

Where did the part go?!

 

Dependant on the only thing that finds me solace

And it becomes useless, easier to just find a man

 

Morning breaks

Noon high

Evening sets

 

Feels like hours fly pass

Feels like history crawls pass

 

Morning breaks

Noon high

Evening sets

 

An embrace of passion and lust

All the while, heart strings part at the brink of death

 

As the wave of sexual tension finally passes

The second wave of dread curls that disgusting sneer

 

Morning breaks

Noon high

Evening sets

 

Feels like days leap pass

Feels like eternities slowly pass

 

Morning Breaks

Noon high

Evening sets

 

Pulled at in two directions

Being ripped to shreds like animals in blood lusts and crazed obsession

 

Uncertainty builds and confusion arises

So to make myself clear I write...

 

Title?

 

Emotionally Inept

 

Author's Note

Noon high is not regarding to being stoned. More like when they would say High Noon as a time of day but it still would have sounded like i was stoned.

Reviews

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

I loved it. I love writing about my feelings, its poetry, you can do what you want. In fact, when you have a gift like yours, sometimes it can be a way to purge all your emotions in a healthy way. I know it has helped me.

[Bhavya Kaushik]

How about keeping it untitled. It is a very complex piece and should be kept like that only. Very powerful indeed!

[AK]

This piece was really good. The emotions you played with were great and I really appreciate that. Awesome job!

[Donald Olds]

Honestly I'm kinda torn on this poem. Most people would think that it's due to lack of understanding but really it's not. I like it in the sense that it pulls me in at the beginning but towards the end i felt like i was getting bored with it, the repitition, but I couldn't stop reading it. But this is just my personal opinion. I'm not the greatest writer in the world and I'll admit it.