just for you

God saw you were getting tired

   And a cure was not to be,

So he put his arms around you

  And whispered, "come to me."

With tearful eyes we watched you,

   And saw you pass away.

Although we loved you dearly, 

   We could not make you stay.

A  golden heart stoped beating,

   Hard working hands at rest.

God broke our hearts to prove to us ,

     He only takes the best

Author's Note

well i hope it is the same

Reviews

[Alexzan Marie]

wow...

so different than your usual light, airy pieces.

This is absolutely touching...and tear jerking.

You have a beautiful soul and the person whom you are remembering in this piece sounds absolutely wonderful, as well.

Wow...

[Sara]

this is so touching! i really really like it. :-)

[Sha*Z*ta]

Nice =O) very emotional to the mind still not at peace with her loss and the reason Why!

[SweetPeachesAlways]

Very beautiful...remind someone to put that on my urn, will you? It should be immortalized somewhere for sure.

[the_real_me]

this poem almost made me cry and it's sweet too

[None]

Your poem is so precious and meaningful. I am in awe of your words and your love for the person this was about. Your poem is caring--beyond words! I'm treasuring this in my favorites library.

[SweetPeachesAlways]

very touching tribute...beautiful write!

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This is a really a nice piece. short and vivid but still its a damn powerful piece.
so..an awesome read overall! :)

[nourrrx3]

this poem is reallyyy good
i really like it.

[Tessa Le Rouge]

i really like this. its very nice. i smiled when i read it. good job!