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Final Song

Final Song

A Poem by justjenn_2u

Dancing until the sweat pours

Arduous ears mixed with regret

Nameless music keys release sores

Carrying released scars for next set

Empty mind cannot forget

© 2014 justjenn_2u


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Dancing is much like writing...good for the heart and soul. Excellent write, Jenn.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

justjenn_2u

7 Years Ago

Ti Amo. Jenn
Felt it ...loved it..totally get it....your profile is as if you picked the words from my brain...a kindred spirit...I have a group page on FB called The poets Loft...check it out...look forward to reading more of your work.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

timthy

7 Years Ago

may I share it on the loft
justjenn_2u

7 Years Ago

Yes, share away
justjenn_2u

7 Years Ago

It's not my best though
Music can express unspeakable pains and so does your poem. Thanks for penning it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

We must have been to some of the same shows. Music is therapeutic for sure.
Great form and use of type face. Kudos.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

justjenn_2u

7 Years Ago

I know I have seen you ; )
I like the last line best. I like the use of the font size as part of it. I am not sure about the "arduous ears" part, but I just may not honestly understand it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

justjenn_2u

7 Years Ago

Basically saying ears it's difficult for this girl to listen. It's toilsome. Glad you liked this. .. read more
Robert Tusitala O'Neill

7 Years Ago

Toilsome! Ah!! I get it. I always try to give my immediate and honest first opinion. It is worth.. read more
justjenn_2u

7 Years Ago

Thanks again Robby. Word play is fun. : )
Oh good one jenn, I've done this dance, you never tend to forget those steps! Dancing whiplash from this one.............

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

justjenn_2u

7 Years Ago

I am glad you enjoyed. It was nice to wake up with dancing in my thoughts. When I dance, I can los.. read more
Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Exactly, I feel the same way....was my pleasure!

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justjenn_2u

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I write from my heart. I follow my instinct. I live impulsively. I never feel like my feet are firmly grounded as I am a free spirit. I am a very intuitive person, sometimes to the point it hurts .. more..

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