what I love about him...

he pays attention to details

he's brilliant and creative

he walks like a viking Irish bard pirate

his voice is smooth and has a quality to it that makes you want to just sit and listen

his hands are wide

he laughs hearty

I can make him laugh

he's simple on the outside and complex on the inside

he can put his deepest feelings into words

he can deliver what he needs to say with his words

he's steady

he admits his faults

he seems like he'd be a warm man to cuddle up to

he makes me want to reach out and touch him even if it's just holding his hand

he can define complex thoughts and concepts and make them seem crystal clear

his writing blows my mind

he has the most respectable job I can think of (in the physical realm)

he's into it and he's good at it

he seems like he wants a family/home life and values it

he guards himself

he's careful

he's funny

he's flaming attractive to me

he seems like he'd be fun to do things outside with

he'd be fun to camp with (he's not clueless outdoors like some guys) (no offense to them at all)

he gives me attention in his own way even though it frustrates me he's still showing his care

he doesn't seem impulsive

he's incredibly romantic

he draws me to him without trying

he's honest (underneath)

he's deep and insightful

he's a genius

and

in some twisted way

he's mine

but not really

 

 

Reviews

[MagicHearted Knight]

I like this alot. It is as if you are building a monument to him, brick by brick, layer by layer. Keep it up and good luck.

[Deborah Shepard]

I liked it great style feelings

[K. Carver]

to be totally honest i couldnt get through it all because it was more of a list than a poem...it just doesnt feel real to me...but you do have potential so keep going...im cheering for you....