Psychic

Psychic

A Story by Katherine Enma Pineapple
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An impulsive write

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Hot tears running down my cheeks, I sniffled. I tried catching my breath in attempt to calm myself down. It worked.
I breathed in and out, in and out, in and out.
I turned to the computer, my usual refuge at times like these. I wipe my tears, wanting the cool air to relax me. As my fingers danced on the keyboard, I broke down crying again.
I was breaking
I was breaking
My strength can't save me now
My heart felt tight. I breathed in and out to see if I could make a difference
My attempt was in vain
Amidst my sobs and cries I heard my phone ringing
Ringing and ringing
I turned to answer it
"Hello?" I said
"Stop crying."

© 2012 Katherine Enma Pineapple


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Haha! Love the ending- great twist and the images painted in my head........

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Pax
what a twist. great!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Katherine Enma Pineapple

10 Years Ago

Thanks you kuyaaa :D
Pax

10 Years Ago

... your welcome.
Whoa creepy ending loved this good job :3

Posted 10 Years Ago


Katherine Enma Pineapple

10 Years Ago

It will reach that point, it will, soon XD just wait
Tsukin Archangel

10 Years Ago

oh no it wont Mine is gonna win >;3 U CANT CATCH UP!
Katherine Enma Pineapple

10 Years Ago

psshhh I think I can XD just believe jk I'm gonna bet on mine ;P
Wonderful read and write. I, too, love God. Not mad, just awake. Namaste

Posted 10 Years Ago


Katherine Enma Pineapple

10 Years Ago

Thank you and glad you shared the love :3
AWWWWWW!!!! I LOVE IT! IT'S SO CUTE!!! haha I'm such a sucker for these kind of things :P

Posted 10 Years Ago


Miiki

10 Years Ago

hahaha all masterminds will have flaws :)
Katherine Enma Pineapple

10 Years Ago

they will because they have us to worry about hahaha >:D
Miiki

10 Years Ago

hahaha :D
Chuckling here... Well done. You drew the line in and I was happy to turn a page.

Take care,
Chris

Posted 10 Years Ago


Katherine Enma Pineapple

10 Years Ago

Thank you :3 Glad that you like it :)
Good story... I know where you got this *evil grin* It's somehow familiar

Posted 10 Years Ago


Katherine Enma Pineapple

10 Years Ago

Ohohoho? You do? glad you know cause I forgot bout it already P:
Rhianne Ney

10 Years Ago

haha lol
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My heart felt tight. I breathed in and out to see if I could make a difference

My attempt was in vain

Amidst my sobs and cries I heard my phone ringing

Ringing and ringing

I turned to answer it

"Hello?" I said

"Stop crying."
That was a little hilarious
Great work! 100/100


Posted 10 Years Ago


Katherine Enma Pineapple

10 Years Ago

Thank you :D
.

10 Years Ago

No problem =)
like it..
at the end there's some one that will cheer you up :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Katherine Enma Pineapple

10 Years Ago

Everyone is -sigh- just here waiting lol
Irvette Dauphine

10 Years Ago

haha..
Katherine Enma Pineapple

10 Years Ago

patience is the key...

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Added on August 20, 2012
Last Updated on August 20, 2012
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