Psychic

Psychic

A Story by Katherine Enma Pineapple
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An impulsive write

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Hot tears running down my cheeks, I sniffled. I tried catching my breath in attempt to calm myself down. It worked.
I breathed in and out, in and out, in and out.
I turned to the computer, my usual refuge at times like these. I wipe my tears, wanting the cool air to relax me. As my fingers danced on the keyboard, I broke down crying again.
I was breaking
I was breaking
My strength can't save me now
My heart felt tight. I breathed in and out to see if I could make a difference
My attempt was in vain
Amidst my sobs and cries I heard my phone ringing
Ringing and ringing
I turned to answer it
"Hello?" I said
"Stop crying."

© 2012 Katherine Enma Pineapple


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Haha! Love the ending- great twist and the images painted in my head........

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Pax
what a twist. great!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Katherine Enma Pineapple

7 Years Ago

Thanks you kuyaaa :D
Pax

7 Years Ago

... your welcome.
Whoa creepy ending loved this good job :3

Posted 7 Years Ago


Katherine Enma Pineapple

7 Years Ago

It will reach that point, it will, soon XD just wait
Tsukin Archangel

7 Years Ago

oh no it wont Mine is gonna win >;3 U CANT CATCH UP!
Katherine Enma Pineapple

7 Years Ago

psshhh I think I can XD just believe jk I'm gonna bet on mine ;P
Wonderful read and write. I, too, love God. Not mad, just awake. Namaste

Posted 7 Years Ago


Katherine Enma Pineapple

7 Years Ago

Thank you and glad you shared the love :3
AWWWWWW!!!! I LOVE IT! IT'S SO CUTE!!! haha I'm such a sucker for these kind of things :P

Posted 7 Years Ago


Miiki

7 Years Ago

hahaha all masterminds will have flaws :)
Katherine Enma Pineapple

7 Years Ago

they will because they have us to worry about hahaha >:D
Miiki

7 Years Ago

hahaha :D
Chuckling here... Well done. You drew the line in and I was happy to turn a page.

Take care,
Chris

Posted 7 Years Ago


Katherine Enma Pineapple

7 Years Ago

Thank you :3 Glad that you like it :)
Good story... I know where you got this *evil grin* It's somehow familiar

Posted 7 Years Ago


Katherine Enma Pineapple

7 Years Ago

Ohohoho? You do? glad you know cause I forgot bout it already P:
Rhianne Ney

7 Years Ago

haha lol
My heart felt tight. I breathed in and out to see if I could make a difference

My attempt was in vain

Amidst my sobs and cries I heard my phone ringing

Ringing and ringing

I turned to answer it

"Hello?" I said

"Stop crying."
That was a little hilarious
Great work! 100/100


Posted 7 Years Ago


Katherine Enma Pineapple

7 Years Ago

Thank you :D
Katerina

7 Years Ago

No problem =)
like it..
at the end there's some one that will cheer you up :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Katherine Enma Pineapple

7 Years Ago

Everyone is -sigh- just here waiting lol
Irvette Dauphine

7 Years Ago

haha..
Katherine Enma Pineapple

7 Years Ago

patience is the key...

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Added on August 20, 2012
Last Updated on August 20, 2012
Tags: tears, sadness, sorrow, breaking

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Katherine Enma Pineapple
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