Killed Herself

My Friend killed herself in the middle of the night,
Because everything went wrong & to her nothing seemed right,
The pain hurt her so much she didn't even care,
About her friends that would always be there,
For her family rejected her for so many years,
At night she'd cry those countless tears,
It was too late for her to see the light,
For no longer did she hold on tight,
I tried to talk to her & keep her on the line,
But she said she had some pills & that she was going to die,
But then there was silence & I yelled "No!"
I ran to her house hoping she didn't go,
But she was already on the floor all limped over,
I rushed her to the hospital hoping she'd recover,
The doctors work on her what seemed like forever,
But she passed away & I went & told her I loved her,
Her Parents overwhelmed with grief & I sat there,
Holding her lifeless hand & looking where...
Where could this person that has been in my life for so long,
Had just like that ended her life & was now gone

Reviews

[Kitty]

This is such a sad poem. Such a harsh realisation of what so many people face (both the person who had killed themself and those left behind.)

Stunning flow and rhyme. Brilliant poem!!!!

Josie

[Rhine Wolf]

So sad! loved the emotion you created in it. well done! my only hope is that this was only a poem and not a reality, if it was sorry for your loss.

[chris' girlfriend]

i still cant believe this is mee!!!!! ^_^

[Courtney]

very very good i love it..

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

So tragicly sad, my prayers go out to you. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[chris' girlfriend]

thank you :)

[chris' girlfriend]

wow!!! who is that about??