Enigma

Amid the zenith and the depth,

My weary lids urge for the shelter.

Infinite sky can illuminate my heart,

Oceans can assuage my thought.,

Alas! Where shall my soul respite??

Deeds pursue only the virtuous,

Evils stifle around the walls.

Figment of LOVE flies beyond,

The energy of LIFE,

The bellow of GRAVE!

Here i grope for my ultimate blithe:

Unison with “THE Holy God”!!

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Kajal, this is a very strong piece with much emotion and feeling. It feels a little angry but desperate to find sanctuary?

[R.T. Edwins]

i really liked it. reminded me of every person's search and desire to be one with God (or source/universe/all that is etc). Very beautiful thanks for sharing.

[Kajal Gulabani]

Thank you ever so much.

[KeeD]

I appreciated this a lot, makes me think of life after death, am I worthy to face God, am I ready to leave the world behind. Yeah really good job.

[Kajal Gulabani]

Thank you so very much.. I feel blessed when I receive such amazing reviews.. smiles !!!