A Stolen Moment

A Stolen Moment

A Poem by Kajal Gulabani

Is it the gush of gale
Blowing away the sands of love?
Is it the rage of whale
Devouring the heavenly hub?

Their numb hearts no more tickle,
Their pale veins gather no life,
Cloud of sorrow hover in the middle,
Shunned are the hours of mushy flight.

Is it a tear for the withered shade?
Is it the need of a stolen moment?
Moment:
where sculpture of love is re- made.
Where message for life is re- sent.

© 2013 Kajal Gulabani


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MAC
very poetic. love this!

okay i suck at reviews but i am honest, this is so wonderfully crafted

Posted 7 Years Ago


Kajal Gulabani

7 Years Ago

Thanks a tonne :)
Nicely written, but i loved this last stanza indeed, i saw there's a great deepness...

Is it a tear for the withered shade?
Is it the need of a stolen moment?
Moment:
where sculpture of love is re- made.
Where message for life is re- sent.......

nice word's, dominant words, well written i'd say. Word's has their own impact on your poem indeed.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Kajal Gulabani

7 Years Ago

Thank yous !
Acer

7 Years Ago

My pleasure :-''')
Beautiful use of words and thoughts in the poem. I had to read again for the pleasure of the strong statements. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kajal Gulabani

7 Years Ago

Thank you
very nice to read thank you for sharing

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kajal Gulabani

7 Years Ago

Thank you. :)
where sculpture of love is re- made.
Where message for life is re- sent.

I love it what more can say ? ... well penned

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kajal Gulabani

7 Years Ago

Thanks a tonne
very well written

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kajal Gulabani

7 Years Ago

Thanks
Sounds much like a war torn love and plea for sanity and acceptance, it's so beautifully etched on the soul, lovely. I can't say more, it got me.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kajal Gulabani

7 Years Ago

Thanks for a suppa review . Huge hugs
Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Was my pleasure, it's truly a lovely piece. :-) xo
Well written

Posted 7 Years Ago


Kajal Gulabani

7 Years Ago

Thank yous
There is a somber quality to this piece. It gets light again at "shunned are the hours of mushy flight." I cant tell if you want to regain that tone in the last stanza. Keep writing :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Kajal Gulabani

7 Years Ago

Thanks

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Added on February 2, 2013
Last Updated on February 2, 2013
Tags: love, value, cherish, joy, sorrow

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Kajal Gulabani
Kajal Gulabani

Ahmedabad, Shilaj, India



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