Friend's Trust

Friend's Trust

A Poem by Kalen Luciano
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I wrote this a long time ago, but it still means a lot to me.

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Friend’s Trust

I am sorry for all the bad things I've done

Especially to drain the trust from someone

As special as you are to me

Even if you don’t agree.

 

Every time they were good intentions,

But they always turned into bad extensions

To the torturous life we live today

And so I am sorry, hope to see you some day.

© 2014 Kalen Luciano


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Pax
there are times, that friendship is put into a test, the test of trust. MOre often the world works in crazy wonders, the society works in numbers and much controlled manner. If somehow this letter will be sent to this friend, things will turn out differently, friends always do understand each other despite the broken trust, it can always be repaired. very nice work.

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Learning to say I am sorry is a very big step in life. Many never learn this skill. It is needed to have trust with any relationship.

I can see you r heart was in this Kalen.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Pax
there are times, that friendship is put into a test, the test of trust. MOre often the world works in crazy wonders, the society works in numbers and much controlled manner. If somehow this letter will be sent to this friend, things will turn out differently, friends always do understand each other despite the broken trust, it can always be repaired. very nice work.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

so short poem but with an appealing effect. theme is great and conveyed beautifully.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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A strong and honest and direct poem. We do abuse and use people who we should be thankful for. I like the tone and the reasons for the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on March 18, 2014
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Tags: Friends, regret, sorrow

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Kalen Luciano
Kalen Luciano

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Hello, one and all. I am Kalen, a teenage boy finding his way in this mysterious world. I like to write whatever comes to my mind which can be something deep and meaningful or depressing or happy or a.. more..

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