Remember

I look at him. He's reading his book.
His non-stopping, stunning eyes scurrying across the printed paper.
My soul holds onto the idea that he surveys my morning hair in this way.
His lips purse.
I paint them in my mind, but pressed atop of mine, rather.
He looks at me briefly and my heart suddenly stops as I allow him to study every aspect of my imagination in a blinks time
does
not
exist.

Author's Note

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Kara M.

Reviews

[Summer]

I remember a lot of things, but nothing as pretty or as sad as this.

[kara_marissa]

Oh how you flatter my words! Thank you so very much for reading.
My best wishes,
Kara M.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

another rather sad piece...he is absorbed in his book...i want to think he is as absorbed in me---but then...he merely turns the page...and i am out of his thoughts.

jacob

[kara_marissa]

I'm surprised to hear that you thought it was sad. My heart led me to believe that this was more of a hopeful piece, with the slightest hint of adoration to the one I am watching. I'm so glad you read and found something different than my own thoughts. Thank you, Jacob!

[writing mojo]

love the measure and melodic flowing in the observation moment of this piece..I am reminded of osmosis and perforation of a white flag surrender held by loving thoughts when the wind changes to questions, getting away before you catch it...good piece

[kara_marissa]

Thank you for such a lovely and descriptive review. I'm so very glad that you enjoyed and I could not thank you enough for your read!
Best wishes,
Kara M.

[kara_marissa]

He is reading you K.M. for sure,
I like this merging fantasy he's reading,
You wanting it's about you... that is top notch.
:) It does excist, as one is a dreamer, this
was utterly beautiful.....
Thank you xx

- Elisa

[kara_marissa]

So very glad you enjoyed, Elisa! Thank you for reading and reviewing! It means the most!
Best of luck to you!

You're precious, so thank you dear :-) thank you too most appreciated... have a nice day xxx

[kara_marissa]

You too! :)