Particles and Waves

Particles and Waves

A Poem by Kori Fitch

Just tried reversing the usual.

Forgetfulness shoots his
arrow through me, yet I live.

I am light.
A particle waking and
A wave dreaming.

The seasons,
the Sun,
the Earth,
are my
the scientists watching
me shift.

An experiment in time/space

Arising forth
A portal
A mirror
A love

I am light.
A particle waking and
A wave dreaming.

© 2012 Kori Fitch

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Nice flow of words and thoughts in the poem. I like the statements.
"I am light.
A particle waking and
A wave dreaming."
Thank you for the nice journey in the outstanding poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago

very nicely written, i liked the way you expressed your feelings here..just the font was not clear for me, maybe its my own problem, but in general, it is really wonderful

Posted 12 Years Ago

i particularly like the repeated lines "i am light. A particle waking and a wave dreaming".

the poem is a rare combination of science and mysticism. the substantial and the insubstantial. beautifully written. so simple yet so complex. loved it.

Posted 12 Years Ago

I love this. The particles and waves are all we truly are, and what we will always remain to be, whose energy never diminishes, no matter how it touches others. Wonderful, wonderful write.

Posted 12 Years Ago

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4 Reviews
Added on May 17, 2012
Last Updated on May 17, 2012
Tags: particles, waves, light, dreaming, Earth, day, night, waking, arrow, forgetfulness


Kori Fitch
Kori Fitch

Page, AZ

I am a late bloomer as far as writing goes, but it seems as if I was pregnant for a long time with ideas, passion and need for expression. Technically I am a English teacher, but don't worry I only c.. more..


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