Dragon of My Dreams

Dragon of My Dreams

A Poem by Kori Fitch
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Just like the mythology of dragons...wisdom, fierce, flying, breathing fire...

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You are the dragon of my dreams

breathing sacred air into my faded flame.


As time and space shift, a translucent

phoenix climbs from the shadow.


Are you the ancient mariner who has

mapped my endless deep sea?


I am a tempest until you embrace me

ebbing and waning no more.


You are the dragon who swims

beneath the wicked facade

hunting me like a champion of fate.


Dragon picture from 

http://dragononline.info/dragon-lords.html

© 2012 Kori Fitch


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Great write. Love the photo you attached.

I too love the Dragon lore,myth, and legend.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I expected something dif when I read the title.This is still a well worded fear of the men who presue us sometimes.I have been in a 16 yr relationship but I watch the dating rituals of my friends.This poem reminded me of them.Scared of the right dragon in love with the wrong one.Taken by the stongest.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Each line could stand on it own. I like the use of the sea and the dragon to make your point. I like the strong ending. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


very wonderful. i liked the imagery way you used the dragon as a symbol of flame. i liked the picking of vocabulary items which really present the objectives. i liked the methods and techniques you used...very nice to read

Posted 10 Years Ago


Wonderful work! Dragons are amazing

Posted 10 Years Ago


Dragons are amazing! Well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I loved this, of course, I also love dragons, but well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on May 18, 2012
Last Updated on May 18, 2012
Tags: dragons, dream, fate, mariner, hunting, swimming, facade, flame, tempest, champion, sea

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Kori Fitch
Kori Fitch

Page, AZ



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I am a late bloomer as far as writing goes, but it seems as if I was pregnant for a long time with ideas, passion and need for expression. Technically I am a English teacher, but don't worry I only c.. more..

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