Dragon of My Dreams

Dragon of My Dreams

A Poem by Kori Fitch
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Just like the mythology of dragons...wisdom, fierce, flying, breathing fire...

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You are the dragon of my dreams

breathing sacred air into my faded flame.


As time and space shift, a translucent

phoenix climbs from the shadow.


Are you the ancient mariner who has

mapped my endless deep sea?


I am a tempest until you embrace me

ebbing and waning no more.


You are the dragon who swims

beneath the wicked facade

hunting me like a champion of fate.


Dragon picture from 

http://dragononline.info/dragon-lords.html

© 2012 Kori Fitch


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Great write. Love the photo you attached.

I too love the Dragon lore,myth, and legend.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I expected something dif when I read the title.This is still a well worded fear of the men who presue us sometimes.I have been in a 16 yr relationship but I watch the dating rituals of my friends.This poem reminded me of them.Scared of the right dragon in love with the wrong one.Taken by the stongest.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Each line could stand on it own. I like the use of the sea and the dragon to make your point. I like the strong ending. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


very wonderful. i liked the imagery way you used the dragon as a symbol of flame. i liked the picking of vocabulary items which really present the objectives. i liked the methods and techniques you used...very nice to read

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wonderful work! Dragons are amazing

Posted 8 Years Ago


Dragons are amazing! Well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I loved this, of course, I also love dragons, but well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on May 18, 2012
Last Updated on May 18, 2012
Tags: dragons, dream, fate, mariner, hunting, swimming, facade, flame, tempest, champion, sea

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Kori Fitch
Kori Fitch

Page, AZ



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I am a late bloomer as far as writing goes, but it seems as if I was pregnant for a long time with ideas, passion and need for expression. Technically I am a English teacher, but don't worry I only c.. more..

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