Stuck like glue

Stuck like glue

A Poem by karmax
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nasty habits,lead to frustration!

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Stuck on the bottom of my shoe

Gross and sticky, Some what blue

Stretching, pulling, scrape it too

This gum was spit by who?

 

In mouth, chomped and chewed

But spitting on the ground

Is just quite rude

 

Paper towels, napkins capture

Save and use the wrapper

No manners, disgusting, unpolite

I wish I wasn't stuck, just not right!

 

© 2011 karmax


Author's Note

karmax
This must be my lucky day, glued by gum!

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Day...abc gum...perhaps it's fate I stepped in it...lol

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is hilarious...mainly because I think at some point in time we have all experienced this! Well done! Keep up the great work!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thanks cuz...nasty a*s gum...arghhh...pirate style!!! Now my poor shoe sits by the door, cause with gum on the bottom, I ain't wearin no more!! lol

Posted 11 Years Ago


Thank you coyote...I think nasty gum has just made my list of number one pet peeves, now that summer has begun to melt it to the pavement everywhere! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


How one can take such a gross encounter and make it seem so funny so just great. I love how you pointed out each step of the situation and turned it into a humorous heck up. Way to go cuz and keep them coming.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I like the poem. You made the bothersome gum seem interesting. I like the way you described the repairing the damage of the gum on your shoe. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago



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karmax
karmax

NY



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Hello :) I am a 32 yr old from NY. I am married and have a daughter the age of Seven. I love to write poetry and play around with words, thus has brought me here. I have a sense of humor and hope my w.. more..

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