Last angel

Last angel

A Poem by karmic
"

I've been gone for a while

"

I control the shadows that can't speak

I became the soilder that grown so weak

bending man's will to it's highest peek

 

am'i in search for war

or is there more

 

I became the devil's sight

and heavens night

casting a shadow even when no light

 

became the saint that has to lie

and the angel that can not fly

© 2009 karmic


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I love this. It reminds me of a story my friend once wrote, except, you know, a poem. It reminds me sort of an angel, maybe, that fell from heaven and his working in the shadows now. I dun know if that's what you were trying to get at or what. But either way, it's awesome and dark and depressing and I just love it to death. XD Awesome.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I feel the writing is full of pain and darkness... sadness is within many.. many will relate in various ways as we are in some pretty dark days!... I hope if these are your true feelings that you find an inner peace and a calling to move on and find light.. I do feel some strength there.. the writing flows pretty nicely and leaves me with a picture of a worn out soldier who is tired and beaten down a bit.. probably needs rest and a new purpose. I like your writing and I am probably wrong about occupation but we all are soldiers these days.. fighting just to live.. thank you for sharing!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Few misspelt words, but its good, its a one that you would ponder over

Posted 12 Years Ago



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