Last chance to change the world

Last chance to change the world

A Poem by karmic

Now I know there's no other way

to bring the next day

 

A tomorrow

A day with no sorrow

 

There's only one way to break sin

that's to give up truth in the end

 

let the lies flow

I have to let you go

 

So i can't have a change of heart

if i want to be the one to rewite this part

the one to bring the world out of dark

 

make the world crumble and fall

just so i can rewrite us all

 

I don't want to be forgiven

i just want you amoung the living

 

Time turned to sand

confused by greed of man

maybe when it's over you will understand

 

for a life with no beginning

has such a sad ending

 

no light to console me

just deadly memories

visions on how the end should be

 

Now wipe away your tears

while i wipe away your fears

© 2009 karmic


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I like this poem alot! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


This one is good to
Great Job :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was a great poem with alot of meaning and I am really really you shared this with us it is a very good poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is filled with alot of meaning and is so

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You are such an amazing writer. Every poem I've read of yours is fantastic and thought-provoking. More importantly, they all keep my attention the entire way through. Kudos, you're marvelous! ;D

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This poem was great :] I enjoyed reading it

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, this poem s awesome. It's wonderfully write and full of emotion.
I love the line: I don't want to be forgiven I just want you to be among the living

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a well written poem, a pleasure to read your poetry.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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