Actors in romance

Complimenting yourself through another's eyes 

Diminishing appeal 

While cutting ties  

Slitting your throat just to feel 

Portraying predictable dreams

Only investing deeply into self employment  

Saying goodbye to you screams 

Just for a taste of enjoyment?

How about you tell me about true emotion

Is it sudden exposure?

Or over simplified motion? 

To keep your own.... Self Composure 

 

Incisions  And visions

Keeps the blood between the start and end 

And isolates it self from deceased skin 

These sparking enticing arrays kept us so still  

Is truth such a ridiculous proposal?  

Your Annotations appear real 

But their just lies at your disposal 

 

So keep the dialogue between us actors 

and let us rehearse this dance 

Does love have to be a factor?

Inside this tragic romance

Reviews

[C.A.Jordon]

wow that is something to cotemplate... well written and i felt its essence

[Star Bright]

I love this poem! Very well written and it flowed quite nicely. The rhyming was awesome as well. (: Great job!

[Shellie]

This was fabulous, just fabulous. so well written and i found your words compelling, i savoured each one. Love the ending. A Triumph!

[A.E. Surdam]

Awwww, it was so beautiful. I just so adore the poem. Very nice and pretty. I can imagine it so well. Nice use of words. :)

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

slitting your throat just to feel, wow! What an incredible line..........love this!

[jayfray]

This poem is very deep. I really enjoyed reading it especially the ending

[LeDiisco]

I like the ending =]