Loves Shower

Loves Shower

A Poem by Katrina Mckeown

We can create a music symphony
With the music from the beats of our hearts
A tender musical harp playing
forming loving parts
A rhapsody of romance
to skip a beat and dance
to print to memory
Every second chance
Every second, every minute, every hour
While love rains down upon us
and we’re soaking in its shower.

© 2020 Katrina Mckeown


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Beautiful....🌹nothing else needs to be said🌹

Posted 7 Hours Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Katrina Mckeown

7 Hours Ago

Thank -you Thoughts in time :)
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SKY
Tender and close to heart. Thanks for sharing your Love Showers. This world needs them...

Posted 8 Hours Ago


Katrina Mckeown

8 Hours Ago

Thank you sky for your kind review :) and yes I agree :)
SKY

8 Hours Ago

Welcome Mate :)
A very pleasant salute to love and its positive effects, but you might drop the second apostrophe in the last line.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Katrina Mckeown

1 Week Ago

Thank you John for your kind review of my poem.
Katrina Mckeown

1 Week Ago

P.s fixed my apostrophe error , thank you for noticing. Kudos
Holding hands walking and laughing in the rain. Oblivious to the cold and wet. That's when you know you are in love. That"s what I thought of
when I read your lines. There are other meanings too. I like work which has layers Katrina.

Chris

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Katrina Mckeown

1 Week Ago

Thank you for your kind review Chris and yes pure love keeps Hearts warm whatever the weather.

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Added on February 14, 2020
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Katrina Mckeown
Katrina Mckeown

West Lothian , United Kingdom



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I try to write inspirational poetry....short poems mainly... though I do write other light hearted stuff too...I have just started writing again recently and I hope most of you will view and honestly .. more..

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