Absorbed

Absorbed

A Poem by Katrina Mckeown
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I fell for you
like raindrops
falling from
the sky
slow and gentle
then heavier
my heart it beats
faster and better
like beautiful
dry flowers
absorb the rain
I became absolutely
absorbed by you.

© 2020 Katrina Mckeown


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I love the metaphor of rain catching force and falling heavier and heavier. Just like a fatal attraction. To be absorbed in someone is an amazing feeling.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Katrina Mckeown

1 Week Ago

Rania thank-you so much for your lovely review
much appreciated. :)
Kind regards Katri.. read more
Rania

1 Week Ago

Welcome! It’s a joy to know and read you dear Katrina ❤️
Nice to see love is still in the air.
As time gets more difficult this love will hopefully blossom.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Katrina Mckeown

1 Week Ago

Thank-you Paul for your kind words .
Katrina
A kind and touching prose, that gathers the feelings to ones chest, well done, good read.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Katrina Mckeown

2 Weeks Ago

Thank-you Thomas for stopping by and your lovely review. Kind regards Katrina .
this kind of falling in love...i think i remember it...i think...
what a nice diversion, a romantic write amid the turmoil we are all facing.
thank you,
j.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Katrina Mckeown

2 Weeks Ago

Thank-you j, glad you enjoyed the diversion :)
Takes me back a while, this one Katrina. Falling in love and using metaphors of nature to describe the depth of intensity.. Nicely conveyed.

Chris


Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Katrina Mckeown

2 Weeks Ago

Thank-you Chris I appreciate you popping by
Katrina x
Christine Anne Shaw

2 Weeks Ago

My pleasure Katrina :)

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Katrina Mckeown
Katrina Mckeown

West Lothian , United Kingdom



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I try to write inspirational poetry....short poems mainly... though I do write other light hearted stuff too...I have just started writing again recently and I hope most of you will view and honestly .. more..

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