Weather or Not

As I got on the bus, I took my seat with a view,
As I looked out I saw rain and sleat splashing down,
This and the dullness of light, gave a surreal feel,

I knew I was on the bus and I knew my destination,
And when it was time to get off, I sighed with hesitation,
As I knew, i was about to be soaked through.

Reviews

[emmajoy]

A time in slow motion.. remembered and felt. But, it seems far, far too slow so you need accept that whatever's going to happen is a while away - waiting has an almost 'surreal feel'. Almost as if the answer is hidden in the shadows.

Shortened because I'd blathered, so sorry.

[Katrina Mckeown]

Exactly emma.. thank you for your kind review of my poem. Kudos

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'Weather or Not'
Katrina McKeown,
Yes, life is in the day to day. Above words were something that I could surly identify. I enjoy being outside very much. A really big umbrella is the best to sit with at a table and just listen to the water falling all around. To be wrapped up warm at a table with my book and notes maybe a pen and a snack. Yes this reminded of times like this.
Blessings,
Kathy

[Einstein Noodle]

a day in the life .. your poem put me immediately on the bus .. daydreaming out the window .. watching the grey of it all ... life does move along and when we get to our stop .. its time to get off .. go to work .. get the job done ... but what if??? what if i just ride that bus all day long :)))))))))))))))))))))
E.

[Katrina Mckeown]

Thank you :)

[wordman]

life in motion,but a great day anyway

[Katrina Mckeown]

Thank-you for your review.

[wordman]

you`re welcome

[Neville]

Made me smile no end.... and I am honoured to be the first to formally review this little gem since the time it was originally posted a mere eleven years ago.. I Hope others now feel able to follow.... Neville

[Katrina Mckeown]

Aww glad it made you smile..thank-you kindly Neville.

[Neville]

you are most welcome..