Battle

You try to tell me you'll be there

and that you'll love me forever

but I see that you don't care

or even like me whatsoever

Stop lying to me!

I know you think it matters

Why can't you see

because of you, our friendship completely shatters

I don't care what you do

whether you hate me or not

I will always love you

despite this battle we fought

Author's Note

This is far from my best and I know it. :P Constructive criticism? Thanks (:

Reviews

[Meredith Leigh]

Wow, for such a young writer you have a very good sense of ryhme and flow. This was wonderfly writen and to the point, keep writing sweetie!!

- Kriss

[Wildecat]

This is a wonderful and well written poem, thanks for sharing.