Ode To My Love

It is not our time now, but only if it were
I'd sail the seven seas for you, i'd take upon your hurt.
I'd search for you upon mountain tops, i'd loudly sing your name
I'd write stories and poems and songs for you, giving our love it's deserved fame.
It is not our time yet, but God willing it shall be soon
I'll round up all the stars for you, i'll captivate the moon
I would ride into battle with you side by side,
Nothing will take you from me my love, though many men will try.
It is not our time mon coeur, and it well may never be
I will find you some how, some day, if only in my dreams
I shall walk with you hand in hand, come rain, snow, or shine
For I have always been ever yours, and you will at last be mine

Author's Note

Reviews are much appreciated

Reviews

[Paul Allison]

Bathed in passion and emotion, this poem to me clearly expresses with each and every line the human need to be wanted and loved. Using rhyming couplets and emotive language you have evoked me as if I feel everything you (the persona) is experiencing. What I really like is the sheer hope that clings with the last line, expressing the extreme almost need for that one person.

[koty bell]

i love the write it makes me happy but yet very sad i had a girl tell me this is how she felt about me turns out she didnt really feel that way anyways great write