Inner Orchestra

We carry Layers hidden which reveal their colors

Inner Orchestra

 

Inner musicality matters in own rhythm

 

This clicks along with the heart.

Silver rimmed soul percussion shining regardless of any circumstance.

What you feel what you mean declared.

 Natural rhythm just right drum beat.

 Memories of past experiences still speak within every streaming layer.

Thrumming humming pushing desire to keep trying,

 Keep living our design, our imprint.

Our persons are rimmed a sandy beach of fine perfect sand twinkling from within.

 They speak and join in our present life,

 a river swirling within each lesson earned and treasured

With this much inner reality pushing against our souls we give it away whether we know it or not.

Kathy Van Kurin Spring, 2022

Author's Note

Have you ever thought; "Oh my private memories or feeling just revealed themselves to others unexpectedly?

Reviews

[Robert Haigh]

Our writings partly reveal who and what we are, just as our actions do. As for our private memories and feelings - when they affect other things and bring about some kind of action or reaction, then yes, they must reveal something to the onlooker, I would say. An interesting poem, nicely expressed!

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Robert Haigh,
I've heard it said that writing is like talking' coming from who we are, how we think...even our essence. What flows from us? is it life? Thanks much for your input and personal opinion. Nice to hear from you.
Bless you and yours,
Kathy

[W. Barrett Munn]

"Silver rimmed soul percussion shining regardless of any circumstance."

I love this line of poetry. A snare drum of the soul that shines. Great metaphor.

Winston

[Kathy Van Kurin]

W. Barrett Munn,
Thank you and thank you again! It's so nice to get encouragement here. Sometimes we recieve inspiration and it just shines. I so appreciate that kind of beauty. Thanks for your gift to others.
Bless you so much. I hope today shines for you.
kathy

[W. Barrett Munn]

You have talent. Keep on writing. And realize you write for an audience of one - you.

[Pete]

wow. so introspective. sometimes others see things in us that we do not. we are a stew of feelings, memories and experiences all simmered to perfection. thought provoking observations you reveal so starkly ... :)

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Thanks Pete,
Just another little note on how one feels in living this life. Whether any of us care or not we all are influenced by one another just like a pond rediating ripples one on another from the the center outward.
Thanks so much for your helpful review!
Blessings,
Kathy

[Richard Knox]

What a lovely, thought-provoking poem! And how true! Very nice.

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Richard Know,
You are welcome and I hope you find much to write and be inspired by.
Kathy

[Fran Marie]

yes I feel we are dead give aways
to some. part of the time .revealing
ourselves by actions and / or. words
those tiny grains of sand pass through
memories and time.;others can pick
up on..

lovely poem dear Kathy

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Fran Marie,
I like your phrase: "tiny grains of sand pass through memories and time." I agree. Oh to be and give more often in honesty without hiding the real us with caution though. Thanks for your sweet review and I wish you a really nice Sunday.
Kathy

[William Michael Reeves]

I have experienced that. Writing something about things I never thought I would, then posting it. This poem must be the click track to your soul. Souls sing silvery symphonic songs that shine!

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Hi there.
Yes we just carry so much within us from which our design is always perfecting if we grow and learn. 'Click track to your soul.' A good phrase William. Thanks for such a fun review! And have a wonderful Sunday.
Kathy

[duff]

There is a rhythm of life. A beat and cadence driving us all. Sometimes you dont need music to capture a moment. The environment is there to play backup. An inner collection we will treasure. Great work.

[Kathy Van Kurin]

duff,
The cadence of our dreams; these dreams at least for me sometimes emanate when I least expect. I appreciate your giving a little of your own personal insight. Creativity is something which is a great gift. I feel that so much of what comes and lives within our desires is part of the thumbprint from our creator and Holy God. So many gift imparted.
Bless you today,
Kathy

[duff]

It was a pleasure a to read it and thank you.

[Coyote Poetry]

I loved the poetry and I agree.
"They speak and join in our present life,
a river swirling within each lesson earned and treasured"
The above lines is true. We will collect personal treasure, we need to keep and remember. Thank you dear Kathy for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Oh Coyote it's so nice to see you here at least since last time. Well, This life is kind of a swirl of many experiences with ups, downs and everything in between but aren't we fortunate even blessed. Yes, I do think that if we pay attention and actually learn from our experiences it is something earned and treasured. Your right on there.
Thanks s much,
Kathy

[Coyote Poetry]

A wonderful poem dear Kathy and you are welcome.

[Sami Khalil]

Title and poem are wonderful. You share with us the secrets embedded within us by the Divine. They are for all to seek, find and enjoy. And maybe use for the welfare of humanity.
You are writing splendidly...

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Sami,
I agree we were designed for a relationship with a Holy God. It is all encompassing and brings light to the darkness.
Thankyou so much for coming by as always I appreciate you so much.
Kathy

[Sami Khalil]

All true and well said. You are welcome Kathy from beautiful Oregon.

[Sami Khalil]

"What you feel what you mean declared.



Natural rhythm just right drum beat."

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Sami,
Yes to be in sync is just our hope. All of us right? Thankyou so much for your reading and giving your own good understanding in what you identify with
Kathy