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A Poem by Katarzyna Slade

To you love is just a game,
Realisation, I've been played,
Just a pawn to you and nothing more
With mighty revenge I'll even the score.

To a dark place my mind has gone,
Till your heart breaks I wont succumb
You have to pay you left me bitter 
when you drown in tears, I'll be the winner

© 2012 Katarzyna Slade


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Katarzyna Slade
Not finished yet x

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even if its not finished, this is a wonderful piece, sometimes if you add too much, it can take away from the meaning.

Posted 9 Years Ago


May not be finished but I also think it'd be perfect as it is. (although I tend towards writing shorter poems in general) It's surely power-packed and full of emotion.

Posted 9 Years Ago


It may not be finished, but it's good enough as it is!

The fact that it's so short gives it this feel as if to say that it has been purposely kept unfinished, which adds depth to it, considering that it appears to be about unfinished business.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Katarzyna Slade
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