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To you love is just a game,

Realisation, I've been played,

Just a pawn to you and nothing more

With mighty revenge I'll even the score.

To a dark place my mind has gone,

Till your heart breaks I wont succumb

You have to pay you left me bitter 

when you drown in tears, I'll be the winner

Author's Note

Not finished yet x

Reviews

[Jordan's Back]

even if its not finished, this is a wonderful piece, sometimes if you add too much, it can take away from the meaning.

[Hiddenfire]

May not be finished but I also think it'd be perfect as it is. (although I tend towards writing shorter poems in general) It's surely power-packed and full of emotion.

[Poetic Shambles]

It may not be finished, but it's good enough as it is!

The fact that it's so short gives it this feel as if to say that it has been purposely kept unfinished, which adds depth to it, considering that it appears to be about unfinished business.