Send This Soul Away

My present feelings. Taken and put into art.

My soul is a maze leading to a dead end
Craming it's mental thoughts in my head
My body just wants to send it all away
But I'm stuck with this pain and longing instead.

I've been cornered into a hole all my life
Suspending the madness until this day
Finding the one person who said he could
Just open up my brown eyes and take it all away.

But in the end I'm left to the same black hole
Looking but not seeing just where I am
My body just wants to send this soul away
But it's hideing in me, holding me in like a clam.

I want to break out and spread like a disease
To show the world how I can't handle all this pain
But they will all just look at me with gawking eyes
Nobody will ever understand in this unworthy game.

As far as they know I am dieing inside
Just breaking down into nothing everyday
They don't care to look twice or give out a hand
Because I can read in their eyes just to stay away.

My body can't handle this withering soul
For it is acheing inside just to be set a stray.
In their eyes, they know it won't get better then this
My body just needs to send this soul away.
 

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

What loveliness..though you are in deepest of sorrows and sadness..your words would shake every heart with their beauty and strength..
I see nothing wrong in a soul that you say its in a maze and leading to a dead end..every soul can lose its way
Maybe you are stuck with this pain for now..
I am cornered in a hole all my life..madness all through my days,
Looking for the one person who will open my eyes and take the madness away
My soul hiding in me ,holding tight,Its like a disease I want to break out
Want to show the world my pains ,but they send me away
Like dying inside,they never care ,never look twice
You will handle this I am sure..
these pretty words,this great insight into yourself will tell you the way out
you can only do it..I am sure you,You can
Lovely write of a warrior,a beautiful fighter..we are all in some kind of war,in a away
lovely write..

I love it and can relate.
You just spelled "hiding" and "dying" wrong.