Dark Side Of The Moon

Is that where they will find me?

As the trees grow greener,
before my tired brown eyes.
My smile stays completely faded.
As dark as the stormy sky’s.

My crown no longer glows
For a proud crowd in the audience.
And my conscience no longer helps,
peak up just a tiny bit of confidence.

My race feels like a one runner.
I’m done competing with myself.
I’m not even half way but I want to stop;
Close this boring book and put it on the shelf.

I wish I had a sparkle in my eyes,
But their darker then the worst days dread.
Its like a morning swim in your own misery.
It’s the hardest stroke to take to try and get ahead.

One day it will be hard to even speak.
My voice will loose it’s smooth tune.
And the angels will be searching for me.
Only to find me on the dark side of the moon.

Author's Note

comments? Thoughts?

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

Oh my friend you ask for my comments and thoughts,I will say this is pure loveliness..its a sad lonely feeling write
but as always your loneliness give you so much beauty ,to your words,and ever shining soul
Your crown will glow I am sure..You will show lots of confidence one day..
You race like a one runner,You say you are half the way and wont stop
Thats the most tyring race but you will do it,You are a winner I am sure
You have your sparkle in your eyes,This morning swim in your misery
Is just a bad luck that will leave one day,The hardest stroke you try
To move ahead,cause you are a champion,Life made you this strong
It will never be hard for you to speak your lovely words
Your voice will never lose its smooth tunes,its like a song
The angels do look for you..all sides of the moon will be bright..just for you
how I enjoyed this ..
lovely write..

[Octob3r Star]

:)

-Joshua