"Promise"

"Promise"

A Story by Katlynn

He was still staring at me, with a look I could not explain.
He knew I hated that f*****g look.
"What?" I said pissed off already by his face.
"Nothing, I promise." he said grinning his stupid "I know I'm pissing you off and I love it" face.
"Did you still want to?" he asked still staring into my soul with his eyes.
"F**k off seriously. I've told you no for the past five months" I said
"Please, I wont let you regret it" he said "You think I would try this long if I thought it wouldn't be good enough for you?"
"I believe that even if it was good enough and I did it, you would still badger me everyday we hang out to do it with you" I said, getting annoyed
"I swear if you give me a chance to show you what I got and you don't like it, I'll never as or bring it up again." He said it with a serious face I've never seen before.
"Promise?" I asked
"Promise" he said in a tone of voice that seemed all so new
"It's to familiar here, if we are going to do this lets at least go in the bathroom." I said frightened but deep down kinda excited
"Wait, out of all places the bathroom?" he asked disgusted
" Yes, lets go!" I said grabbing his hand to pull him towards the door. He reached in his pocket to make sure he had what he needed, he did.

© 2014 Katlynn


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Katlynn
What do you think is really happening here?

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Added on September 19, 2014
Last Updated on September 19, 2014
Tags: suspense, short story, what is really happening, dialogue