The Fates Have Intertwined

The Fates Have Intertwined

A Poem by Silently waiting

The fates have intertwined you and I,
For good or for bad I do not know,
I cannot tell you,
How deeply I've fallen,
Not for you,
Not for human.
The fates have intertwined you and she,
Not for the deeds of love,
But for the deeds of the dead.
The fates have intertwined him and her,
Not that they yet realize.
The fates have gone crazy,
Thinking we could be together,
We torture one another,
Like a sadistic game of ring around the rosy.
The cycle continues, 
With every one of us,
We go around,
Torturing everyone the fates pair us with.
The fates have intertwined you and I,
And you and she,
And she and he.
Everything happens for a reason,
Which will always do us good,
Everything happens for a reason,
The fates know their game.
Such a sadistic game it is,
Fun for them,
Torture for us.
We know not what the fates have in store,
We are not meant to know.
The fates have intertwined everyone, and everything, for a reason.
We must accept that fact.
The fates control us,
Whether we know it or not.
The fates intertwined you and I,
I couldn't be happier.

© 2013 Silently waiting


Author's Note

Silently waiting
I was just sort of rambling on with the first things that came into my mind on this one..

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More good work! Like your other work, creative. The intertwining is well woven to create your story.

Just a few carps:
The first line can be changed from "you and I" to "you and me" if you want the rhyme with "and he". Also, I think it's actually more grammatically correct.
"Not that the yet realize. Should be "they" and "weather" "whether", I think."

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silently waiting

11 Years Ago

Thank you, and actually, in the beginning where it says "The fates have intertwined you and I" It is.. read more
pasdepoisson

11 Years Ago

Yeah, don't you hate it when that hoppens?



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More good work! Like your other work, creative. The intertwining is well woven to create your story.

Just a few carps:
The first line can be changed from "you and I" to "you and me" if you want the rhyme with "and he". Also, I think it's actually more grammatically correct.
"Not that the yet realize. Should be "they" and "weather" "whether", I think."

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silently waiting

11 Years Ago

Thank you, and actually, in the beginning where it says "The fates have intertwined you and I" It is.. read more
pasdepoisson

11 Years Ago

Yeah, don't you hate it when that hoppens?

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