Noticing You

finally being interested in someone i see a lot... (:

when i first saw you
my heart did a little flutter
jumping slightly at the look
in your eyes the first time

you were calm
quiet
reserved
a mystery

i instantly wanted
to know more
learn whats behind
the quiet smile and sad eyes

your physique was like
a charm, intriguing
drawing me in
noticing you

casting quick glances
from my little corner
wondering whether
you would notice me

Author's Note

pretty straightforward and nothing special. straight from the heart, not edited or anything

Reviews

[zainul]

Candid statement.
Lovely work.

[CJ Richards]

I returned the favor :)

[Donald Cole]

I like this Kat. It is like writing about thinking what you are thinking. It is also a powerful tool of reflection which I find myself attaining in my writings, (to me its called therapy, lol).
I am glad you can write straight from the heart. I believe that God intended us to be connected to our feelings like this and you are. Don't ever let go of your gift Kat.
Don

[- - -]

I love it. I agree with Bennet, and I hope that you get to know him like you want...:)

[R.G. Bennet]

I really like this. It describes what a lot of us feel at certain points of life when a sense of intrigue (and maybe more?) stirs within us at the sight of "that" person.